Wednesday, October 19, 2005

kosmic love

a sun blazes from each eye
you have a universe in your head
the tips of your hair caress the sky
everything you touch is blessed
your words left me beyond speechless
i stare into the dark abyss
that i have been
at times
and reach
toward the newborn stars
emerging
from the nothingness
my outstretched hand meets and twines with yours
as yours is reaching out for mine

10 Comments:

Blogger Duilliath Siondrake said...

speechless!
Excellent prose, my dear, once upon a time i would have beleived it to be mine merely by the imlplications alone....
But i want to actually adress something else here.. Jeremy, i have slighted you. You had me with your trap, i confess..you got me, what can i say...can we start anew?
I really want to be your friend..i was frustrated by your talk of blowing me off and telling me to fuck off.. i don't buy that you want me to fuck off..I think that we have a misunderstanding of each other .. and i want to destroy that lie..Jeremy, if your out there, just hear me, i wish you no ill will. We are kin and kine, i wish only the best for you and i am sorry for blowing my stack, it was bad form on my part..

5:37 AM  
Blogger Duilliath Siondrake said...

Show this wicked little town something beautiful and new...

5:42 AM  
Blogger idnami said...

duilliath, jeremy, in the interests of his sanity, does not read my blog anymore. see why? try email.

6:43 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

*swoon*

Now, I am blushing with virgin-shame ^_^

7:50 AM  
Blogger Duilliath Siondrake said...

rofl!
Sorry M, haha..i guess thats why people stay away from computers after drinkin 2 mickeys of rhye.
Awsomeness poem though :)

10:59 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

jeremy doesn't read your blog? Don't fool yourself.

12:26 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Well, that would make him rather weak then, wouldn't it?

9:20 PM  
Blogger Nephilim said...

hahah, it's M's general message board for other people....
hee
and I won't apologize M, part of the drawbacks of being so famous, every1 reads your blog, so this is the best place to leave messages...

Strixy, tried to comment, but it won't allow non-members to comment on your blog, that may be why no one has yet....

12:58 PM  
Blogger Nephilim said...

By the way, nice poem....

12:59 PM  
Blogger idnami said...

i have to say it really irritates me that not one single person acknowledged what the hell i was talking about here except in passing, and that this turned into the message board of he who must not be named (but was anyway).
this was like a month ago, but holy fuck you guys! have a little respect! for him if not for me. i mean why on earth would you attach messages for a guy to a love poem his ex wrote for someone else? bad form people!
sorry, had to say that. love you all.

4:05 PM  

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